Today we had to watch and evaluate others film opening giving them feedbacks and trying to find out what we could do better while the others gave us their opinions about our film opening.
The mistakes that we did and what we need to improve are,
- We used too much black and white, nearly the whole opening is black and whit except for one feedback.
- We should take some parts of me walking in the movie and replace it with footage of Lisa Mitchell so the watcher knows more about her while watching the opening.
- We might put a sort of dialogue in the opening because there is none in the moment. But actually that is what we wanted to do, no words but meaningful pictures/shots, so we need to talk about this point again.
- We need to shorten our opening, at the moment it is 2:18 long and our target respectively the given target is 2:00 max. The challenge will be to put some more material of Lisa Mitchell without passing the given time limit.
Written by Henri Yueksel
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